Boring Scenes: How to Spot Filler and Fix It
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Most first drafts have scenes that exist because the writer needed to write something. The character had to get from A to B. Someone had to be introduced. Something had to be explained. These scenes feel purposeless when you read them back — because they were written without purpose. Here's how to identify them and what to do about them.
The Scene Audit Test
- Can you summarize what this scene accomplishes in one sentence?
- After this scene, is the protagonist's situation meaningfully different — either externally (plot) or internally (character)?
- Does this scene contain conflict — at least one moment where what someone wants runs into an obstacle?
- If you cut this scene entirely, would the story still make sense?
- Does at least one character want something specific in this scene?
If It Fails the Audit
A scene that fails most of these questions is either filler or a scene that's doing the wrong job. Not every scene needs to be an action scene or a confrontation — but every scene needs to do at least one of the following: advance the plot, develop character, raise stakes, reveal information the reader needs. A scene that does none of these is filler.
The answer isn't always to cut it. Sometimes the scene has the right bones but needs conflict added. Sometimes it needs to be merged with the scene before or after it. Sometimes cutting it reveals a gap in the plot that needed to be there.
Fixes for Boring Scenes
- Add a problem that has to be solved. If the scene is a character traveling from the city to the docks, give them a problem on the way. They're being followed. They realize something they forgot. They encounter someone they were avoiding. One obstacle turns a transit scene into a scene.
- Introduce tension between characters. Two people who agree on everything generate no drama. In any scene with multiple characters, look for what they could disagree about, even slightly. The disagreement doesn't have to be the point of the scene — it just keeps the air charged.
- Move the scene's information into another scene. If the scene exists only to deliver information, try cutting it and weaving that information into a scene that already has something happening.
- Cut it. If it has no purpose and fixing it would require invention rather than revision, cut it. A shorter book with no filler is better than a longer book with it.
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