Scene Conflict Checklist: 10 Signs and How to Fix Each

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Use this checklist to diagnose weak conflict in your scenes. Read through a scene, check off signs that match, then apply the fix. Aim for every scene to push character goals against obstacles.

Strong conflict forces decisions and reveals character. Run this list before revisions to spot drags.

1. Characters agree too easily

Dialogue flows without pushback; everyone nods along to the plan.

Fix: Give one character a hidden agenda that clashes with the group. Make agreement cost something, like time or risk.

2. No clear goal in sight

Characters wander without stating what they want from the scene.

Fix: Start with a specific want tied to the larger plot, like 'convince the guard to let us pass' or 'steal the key before dawn.'

3. Obstacles feel external and random

A storm hits or traffic delays, but it doesn't tie to characters' choices.

Fix: Root obstacles in opposition from another character or past actions, like a rival blocking the door they unlocked earlier.

4. Stakes stay vague

Failure means little; no mention of personal loss like reputation or a loved one.

Fix: Name one concrete loss if the goal fails, such as 'lose the only witness' or 'get disowned by the family.'

5. Reactions stay calm

Characters shrug off setbacks instead of showing frustration or fear.

Fix: Layer in physical tells and inner thoughts: clenched fists, rising pulse, doubts about their plan.

6. Scene ends in status quo

Nothing changes; characters part with the same knowledge and position.

Fix: Force a shift like gaining a clue, losing an ally, or committing to a dangerous next step.

7. Internal thoughts dominate

Backstory dumps or brooding fill space without forward action.

Fix: Limit thoughts to 20% of the scene; tie them directly to the current obstacle, like 'If he spots the scar, we're done.'

8. Antagonist absent or weak

No opposition figure; conflict simmers without a face.

Fix: Bring in the antagonist or their proxy with a conflicting want, even if off-page through a message or minion.

9. Pacing drags with description

Long setups of rooms or weather bury the conflict.

Fix: Cut descriptions to essentials that heighten tension, like 'Sweat drips down his back as footsteps echo closer.'

10. No escalation

Conflict peaks early or stays flat through the scene.

Fix: Build in steps: minor block, then complication, then crisis forcing a choice under pressure.

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